Little women-نساء صغيرات

A scary fairy tale!!
once upon a time..ِIn my fairy tale or yours??
there was ..And in mine.. there is one!!
but 'was' is gone..to make your princess____happy??
and won't come back again..who wants to read: there was a happy princess!!
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once upon a time..In my fairy tale or yours??
things were ..And in mine there are lots of them!!
but not any more..Did you change the plot??
now they're gone with the wind... borne from the stubborn typhoon of your
rational mind!!
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it felt good..to turn that fairy into scary ??
even for a that moment in time..the princess really thought!!
strange how things change..when the author say soooo!!
or do they ?Change him first???
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we blame our time all the time..Coz when we write... it stops!!
but is it our time's fault?..................??
could it be....................?????
just humans' mixed feelings and
selfish tends? I must agree!!
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the previous words are mine.. but
the nearby is not:
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Notes:
I could not leave her words just alone and unharmed
!!
I forced mine in
!!
And make an imaginative-rational conversation between my soul and her brain
!!
Coz ,really I admire every remarkable nerve of it
!!
-Remar,dear forgive me but my dairy's blood stained the papers of yours
!!
:9_33:

Greeno.. impressive !

you know when you merge the thoughts of two

individuals, you get an amazing outcome ..

really liked what you have done in there

though .. I wouldn't want to look at the past

because obviously it has passed..

let's look at the future.. and look forward to

enjoy it :)

today.. was a rainy day..

not a rainy day :(

but it was raining almost all day long !

love the smell of the rain.. and the scent you

find in the air before that.. and after it ..

the peaceful atmosphere.. how people disappear..

[COLOR=sienna]stay home.. drinking hot milk or tea..[/COLOR]

smiling .. and enjoying the tranquility..

isn't it beautiful ? ?

isn't it nice ? ?

to have such a surprise ? ?

today .. was an amazing day.. though

most of us spent the day inside ..

مطرنا بفضل الله و رحمــــــــــــــــــتــــــــــه

The meaningful thoughts that dropped peacefully from your amazing raining mind were soooooo beautiful ..while they were spreading & sliding easily all over
the
innocent
surface
of
your
dear
last night
dairy
!!
R[COLOR=Purple]emar[COLOR=Red]ooooooo[/COLOR] l[/COLOR]:15:ve, thanks for your continuous encouraging comments
!!

It's getting cold..

my jacket.. long time no see..

My dark companion

The night has become my companion..

we stay together.. to pass the time..

not a lot of words..

silence..

I discovered that the sound of silence is

so horrible..

it hurts your ears.. it does !

though it is pretty quiet outside..

the result is a tornado in the mind..

lots of noise.. lots of conflicting ideas..

lots of sorrows.. and lots of hopes..

the noise and the silence announce the

beginning of another day..

with the actual noise outside.. and

the quiet atmosphere inside..

waiting to ..

reverse roles at night
!!
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I found this piece of paper lost in our chatting room.. for sure it was torn out from a [COLOR=DarkRed]remarkable diary !! It was [/COLOR][COLOR=Red]wrongly[/COLOR] placed there by my dearest companion in this section Remaro ,
I enjoy very much your deep diaries
!!

thanks bent al janoub.. :)

and thanks a lot Greeeeeeeeeeen salad

for your effort .. sorry for the trouble :P

hope to read one of your writings very soon

looking forward to enjoy your imagination again..

hiii
iloved your subject green salad .. and i want to sharing with u and all lovly girls
but my problem that my english soooooooooooo bad as you see so if you can help and accept me i well be happy

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hiii
iloved your subject green salad .. and i want to sharing with u and all lovly girls
but my problem that my english soooooooooooo bad as you see so if you can help and accept me i well be happy

Sweety ,sensitive diamond
!!
Thanks for your lovely words about this topic
!!
Dear,who said that all of us here are perfect in writing in English
!!
We all make mistakes so, relax & do not worry , my lovely sister,
Come & share us with some pages from your pure diary
!!
Coz what we really wanna read here is your sensitive soul & not your rookie writing
!!
:8875:

Um Wisam

For sharing one page from your dear diary with us
!!
We are honored to have you as a regular diarist among us all
!!
And
we really hope that you
always allow us to enjoy your nice & emotional writing
many times
!!
Many thanks to you my
dearest sister
!!

thanks alot my sister green salad
iknow that you are kind of nice and cute persone ,you make me feel happy
i will try and try to let yo know what i want to say coz i found many words i dont know or forget it
finaly iam looking for word to be exiland in english and i want you to be my teather if you dont mine

please if you can corect the spilling i will be happy to help me
realy i loved you from my hard

الماسة وحساسة;7716644:
thanks alot my sister green salad
I know that you are a kind ,nice and cute person ,you make me feel happy .
I will try and try to let you know what I want to say coz I found many words that I don't know or forget .
Finally I am looking forward to be excellent in English and I want you to be my teacher if you don't mine.

Please if you can correct the spelling I will be happy if you can help me
really I love you from my heart

ME too sweety
I love you from my deepest part of my friendly heart as a new dearest sister
!!

um wisam

i have same your feels coz my husband go away befor 6 days but he didnot travel he is in doha but he het someone so he is know at present and i dont know for how long he well be their
sooo i feel also lonly and hopless coz who left the mather or hausband will be for sour very lonly and the bothe of them left me but my mother died befor 2 years
so my heart with you

الصراحه فدييييتج عزيزتي سلطه خضراء
بجد كفيتي ووفيتي مشكووووووووووووورة حبيبتي

بس لو حسيتي بملل او ثقل لا تغصبين عمرج لاني بخيم بالموضوع اليوم بالليل
وربي يكتبلج اجر بكل حرف وكلمة تعلميني عليهاويجعله بميزان حسناتج

الماسة وحساسة;7717297:
الصراحه فدييييتج عزيزتي سلطه خضراء
بجد كفيتي ووفيتي مشكووووووووووووورة حبيبتي

بس لو حسيتي بملل او ثقل لا تغصبين عمرج لاني بخيم بالموضوع اليوم بالليل
وربي يكتبلج اجر بكل حرف وكلمة تعلميني عليهاويجعله بميزان حسناتج

تسلمين لي يالغالية!!
لاثقل ولا ملل!!
وكلامج عسل على قلبي!!
الموضوع عبارة عن دردشتنا و فضفضتنا مع روحنا!!
خربطنا ولا غلطنا ما فيها شي!!
هذي مذكراتنا واللي نبي نكتبه راح نحطه ونصب كل اللي في خاطرنا !!
المهم نكسر حاجز الخوف من الكتابة!!
و عن تصحيح مذكراتج!!
اكيد باقي العضوات ماراح يقصرون معاج وراح يساعدونج ويشوفون لج الاخطاء !!

today i feel disappointed

coz i dont have anything to do and i left my job befor 3 monthe coz i was bregnant and now i have beateful littel girl her name is dana ... she is the my soul
i friade if i well back to work who well be with her .. i feel i cant left her with sombody

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um wisam

i have same your feels coz my husband go away befor 6 days but he didnot travel he is in doha but he het someone so he is know at present and i dont know for how long he well be their
sooo i feel also lonly and hopless coz who left the mather or hausband will be for sour very lonly and the bothe of them left me but my mother died befor 2 years
so my heart with you

plez i want somebody to correct the rong spilling
and i well proushted

this morning i wakup early
i feel buter from yesterday i drink coffee and waithing my doter to wakup

الماسة وحساسة;7719612:
today i feel disappointed

coz i dont have anything to do and i left my job befor 3 monthe coz i was bregnant and now i have beateful littel girl her name is dana ... she is the my soul
i friade if i well back to work who well be with her .. i feel i cant left her with sombody

Thanks my dear .. It's good to have someone shares you the same feeling .. hope your husband will come back soon.. congrats for your little girl .. God bless her & you

Advice : If you want to develop your writing and spelling ability .. read a lot and don't read anything>>>novels are really the best thing you can read .. you have fun and at he same time developing your expression skills.