I hope to correct my mistakes and please, give me advice how can I become perfect wittier
This is my composition
In period pregnancy is very important. Must for all pregnant care for herself in this period because if she does not care herself will effect in her self with embloyeed, and will be tired. These best thing to care women about herself to visit her doctor to ask his about her embloyees, to eat the healthy food, to make exercise, does not breathing the air
We all admire the visiting to the doctor to pregnant very important to help our embryo and, our self, and to share from peace our baby.
Eat the healthy food, some food help the pregnant seem a good healthy, and to be a good body and mor activity.
The walk help the pregnant to become her birth very easy, and keep her weight.
The breathing is air pollution it's effect to women with their baby. It's make fast birth before it's time
The pregnant must eat the healthy food, make exercise , and visit her doctor because she make all these will keep for her health and guarantee good pregnant.
وشكرا لكم اتمنى تصححوا لي تعطوني نصائح كيف اكون في كتابة المقال ممتازه بحيث اكتب عدة صفحات من دون اي غلط
مقااااااااال مساعده بليز
ا
21-06-2012 | 03:18 PM
ا
21-06-2012 | 03:19 PM
للاستاذه دايم تقول لي كتابتك ضعيفه شنو بعمل
C
23-06-2012 | 01:33 AM
اختي دايما اقري اللي تكتبينه وجوفي هل له معنى او فيه اغلاط وحاولي تستخدمين مبدئيا اسهل طريق لكتابة الجمل اللي اهيه (فاعل+فعل+مفعول به)... وبعد ترا الترجمة من عربي لانجليزي والعكس مو شرط يكون حرفيا وخلي احد يقرى لج اللي تكتبينه بعد ويراويج وين الغلط وحاولي تتعلمين من اغلاطج هذي اهم شي
وهذي التعديل
(اللي بالاسود اهوه التعديل وقارني بين المقال حقج والتعديل وجوفي وين اغلاطج وحاولي ما تكررين المعلومات لان في التعديل في معلومات مكررة وبالتوفيق):
The pregnancy period is very important. All the pregnants must take care of themseves in this period because if she does not care about herself, this will affect her employment where she will usually feel tired. The best way that pregnent women can take care of herself is to visit her doctor to ask him about her work, healthy food, and exercise.
We all advise visiting the doctor to pregnant women because it is very important to help herself, and her baby.
Pregnant women must eat healthy food, and there are some food that help the pregnant seem in a good health, to have a good body and more active.
Walking help the pregnant to have an easier birth giving, and to keep her weight.
Air pollution affects negatively pregnent women and their baby. It makes the birth giving before it's time
The pregnant must eat the healthy food, make exercise , and visit her doctor because all these will keep her health and guarantee good pregnancy.
وهذي التعديل
(اللي بالاسود اهوه التعديل وقارني بين المقال حقج والتعديل وجوفي وين اغلاطج وحاولي ما تكررين المعلومات لان في التعديل في معلومات مكررة وبالتوفيق):
The pregnancy period is very important. All the pregnants must take care of themseves in this period because if she does not care about herself, this will affect her employment where she will usually feel tired. The best way that pregnent women can take care of herself is to visit her doctor to ask him about her work, healthy food, and exercise.
We all advise visiting the doctor to pregnant women because it is very important to help herself, and her baby.
Pregnant women must eat healthy food, and there are some food that help the pregnant seem in a good health, to have a good body and more active.
Walking help the pregnant to have an easier birth giving, and to keep her weight.
Air pollution affects negatively pregnent women and their baby. It makes the birth giving before it's time
The pregnant must eat the healthy food, make exercise , and visit her doctor because all these will keep her health and guarantee good pregnancy.
س
23-06-2012 | 05:07 PM
الاخت ماقصرت عدلتلج اغلااااطج ..
ا
23-06-2012 | 09:04 PM
Thank you cool girl for your help Allah blass u
I want to ask u
The pregnants must take care of themselves
Why u put of in this sentences .
Please, if you have explain for this tall me
I do not different about for-of...
The end sentences guarantee good pregnancy.
Why we do not say guarantee a good pregnancy.
I want to ask u
The pregnants must take care of themselves
Why u put of in this sentences .
Please, if you have explain for this tall me
I do not different about for-of...
The end sentences guarantee good pregnancy.
Why we do not say guarantee a good pregnancy.
ا
23-06-2012 | 09:05 PM
Thank u Sahaba Amal your passing by
C
24-06-2012 | 01:09 AM
Thank you cool girl for your help Allah blass u
you are welcome:thumbs_up:
I want to ask u
The pregnants must take care of themselves
Why u put of in this sentences .
Please, if you have explain for this tall me
I do not different about for-of...
اهوه صج هالاثنين يخربطون لان لانهم مواضع يناسبون الاثنين ومع التعود على الكتابة بتعرفين الفرق اكثر والاماكن المناسبة حق كل واحد فيهم بس في هالجملة انسب of لان المعنى شوي يختلف لما تحطين for:
the pregnants must take care for themselves
المرأة الحامل يجب ان تهتم لاجل نفسها
the pregnants must take care of themselves
المرأة الحامل يجب ان تهتم بنفسها
مثال:
I will take care of you
سوف اعتني فيك
I will take care for you
سوف اعتني لاجلك (وهني يكون الاستخدام اذا شخص بيعتني بشي عشان شخص اخر)
وهذي معاني بسيطة حق الاثنين:
- for:
1) بمعنى "لمدة".
سأعيش هنا لمدة خمسة أيام
I will live here for fivedays
سأحبكِ للأبد.
I will love you forever
1) بمعنى "لمدة".
سأعيش هنا لمدة خمسة أيام
I will live here for fivedays
سأحبكِ للأبد.
I will love you forever
2) بمعنى "لأجل ، من أجل".
أنا أعمل لأجلكم.
I am working for you
أنا أعمل لأجلكم.
I am working for you
3) بمعنى حرف الجر "اللام".
هل صوتت للرئيس؟
Did you vote for the President?
هل صوتت للرئيس؟
Did you vote for the President?
- of:
1) للربط بين المضاف والمضاف إليه (الملكية).
The Queen of Spainأميرة أسبانيا
The owners of the car مالكو السيارة
1) للربط بين المضاف والمضاف إليه (الملكية).
The Queen of Spainأميرة أسبانيا
The owners of the car مالكو السيارة
2) للتعبير عن جزء من مجموعة.
A part of the cake قطعة من الكيك
An appleof the box تفاحة من الصندوق
A part of the cake قطعة من الكيك
An appleof the box تفاحة من الصندوق
3) للتعبير عن الكميات
a lot of noise قليل من الضوضاء
a literof oil لتر من الزيت
dozens ofeggs درازن من البيض
thousandsof balls آلاف من الكرات
a lot of noise قليل من الضوضاء
a literof oil لتر من الزيت
dozens ofeggs درازن من البيض
thousandsof balls آلاف من الكرات
The end sentences guarantee good pregnancy.
Why we do not say guarantee a good pregnancy.
you mean why we didn't say guatantee a good pregnant as you wrote it before right?
pregnant يعني مرأة حامل
pregnancy يعني الحمل
الجملة ما تناسب ان تقولين ان ما يضمن حامل جيدة بس لما انحط pregnancy تصير الجملة ان يضمن حمل سليم واهيه الاصح...
اتمنى قدرت اوصل المعلومة واذا ما عرفتي اي شي لا تترددين
ا
25-06-2012 | 10:04 PM
مشكوووووره
أنا قصدي انو انتي ماوضعتي a
قبل جملة good pregnancy
قل نضع قبلها a او لا
اذا مانحط ليه
أنا قصدي انو انتي ماوضعتي a
قبل جملة good pregnancy
قل نضع قبلها a او لا
اذا مانحط ليه
س
26-06-2012 | 10:40 AM
كووووووووول شرح ممتاز ...
C
26-06-2012 | 11:18 PM
القلب العظيم;16148845:
مشكوووووره
أنا قصدي انو انتي ماوضعتي a
قبل جملة good pregnancy
قل نضع قبلها a او لا
اذا مانحط ليه
you are welcome
احسن تحطينها حبيبتي فالاصح ان تحطين a...
سحابه أمل;16149429:
كووووووووول شرح ممتاز ...
thanks alot:o
ا
28-06-2012 | 09:19 AM
شكر كنول قيرل الله يوفقك يااااااااااااارب
C
30-06-2012 | 12:10 AM
you are welcome
and good luck to you too
and good luck to you too