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غربة الرّوح 20-08-2008 12 رد 2,610 مشاهدة
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Assalamu aleykum wa rahmatullah wa barakatuhu...

This poem is written by anonymous person, but I saved it in my computer.. Hope you like it .. Maybe some of you wouldn't understand what it meant, but by Allah it goes deeply true inside my heart..

They are two characters talking here..
And here it is..
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listen

no

listen

no

listen

What?

.......................................................

well?

well what?

what did you have to say?

nothing

what

what?

................................................

are you listening?

no

how do you know?

what? how do i know what?

that you're not listening?

what?

.....................................................

can you hear it?

hello, I said can u hear it??..

i heard

oh, i thought you weren't listening.

what?

I thought you weren't listening.

im not deaf, I heard you

then why cant you hear it?

hear what?

that.

What's that?

Can't you hear it? Get closer.

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She's crying.

.............................

So you hear it?

Yes

.....................................

soooooo

so what?

...........................

you don't hear it.

........................................

Go away

No

Go away

I can't

Why not?

Because

Because what?

Just cant

Why?

..............................................

Where are you?

Right where you left me.

Is she still crying?

Yes

Where is she?

There

Where?

Over there

I can't see her

Yes you can

i think I'd know if I could see her.

Then why cant you?

Because no-ones there

Yes she is, she's right over there

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Are you blind?

No

........................................

Can you see her?

No

But I thought you could

Not anymore

What do you mean?

I mean I can't see her

Did she go?

No

Then where is she?

I don't know

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Am I blind?

What's in front of you?

A wall.

Then no you're not blind

.................................

Has she come back?

Yes.

But I can't hear her anymore

Is she still crying?

No

That's good.

I said that's good.

I heard you.

........................

Is it not good she's not crying anymore?

Yes

..............................

Take me to her.

No

Why not?

She's not there

Where did she go?

I cant say.

Why not?

Just because.

Is she okay?

Finally.

What do you mean, finally?

Couldn't you hear?

Hear what?

Her cries

No

You didn't want to

How do you know I didn't want to?

I know

...................................

Who are you?

Don't you know?

No

That's a shame?

......................

She was a good woman you know, she didn't deserve that at all.

What happened to her? What didn't she deserve?

It's too late now. No use in dwelling on the past.

But I want to know.

No point. It's over. You had your chance. And now it's gone

What? What are you talking about? What chance did I have? I don't understand.

That's okay.

No its not.

Now you want to help.

Help with what?

Didn't you hear her cries? She was calling you.

What? I didn't hear.

Yes you did.

No I didn't.

Yes you did. I told you.

What?

I told you. But you refused to listen.

i didn't know. I'm sorry.

Don't be. It won't help her now.

What can I do? I want to help?

Don't worry. Some one will come. They will help. They're just not here yet. Maybe they haven't heard it yet.

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Who are you?

Don't you know?

No

Well that's a shame.



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What a breath-taking poem!!

You really need to be patient so, u can follow & finish it all !!

& to understand what's behind this long conversations which is full of lots of funny mockery!!

I felt that we can have & make a similar pointless conversation one day,..
when we r talking to our mean conscience!!
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Thanks alot sweety for this lovely poem
U
i read the poem but i didn't understand what they talking about

last year i was studying english Literature but i left the
university because i was weak in the Literature
( poems and storys )
and now i want to study again


عائشه 1985 green salad i think you are good
in Literature can you teach me please
poems only
غ
You're most welcomed Sis. Green Salad: Fattouch or Tabboule =)

Sis. Bahraini.com ; I didn't study English literature in my university , but I passed by it during my intermediate grades..

This poem is so easy and the words are so easy too..

Just to try to focus well on the two characters..

Perhaps if you reread it again , it will be easier for you..

It talks about someone talking with his conscious ( his inner belief) ..

and the (she) is a woman who he had hurt before.. or he misunderstood her.. maybe his mother, his wife , or even his belover ...

I hope that I approached the idea to your mind Sis..

Assalamu aleykum ..
U
i know the words are too easy
but this is my problem i don't understand
poems i can just read them like this one

i understand it now thank you a lot
i think its nice poem i will read it again
غ
Okay, I will be waiting for your comment =)
s
waleykum assalam wa rahmatullah wa barakatuhu

hahhahahahaah ,, i enjoyed reading ths wonderful poem

thanx 3ayosh
. keep up the great work
غ
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thanx sister

nice one
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us

and we are waiting for more

keep it up

^_^

:9_33:
غ

Miss Saro & Sali
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wo0o0ow dear... that was a very good one

I am not that much of a fan of poetry .. but I liked this one..

and i was sooo happy I got it right from the first time I read it..

my dear conscience.. remember our talk.. or shall I say talks...

how many times do we have such conversations a day...

how many times did you make me go away..

how lovely it was from you to guide me..

and enlighten me..

to show my the way to please Allah first .. and do the right thing..

to become the person I want to be in life..

to become a good mom and a good wife..

to become a human being in this world..

to become .. just a lovely girl..............
غ
Alhumdulillah..

I've just evaluated you =)
You got a good language..

Thank you for your nice comment..

I hope that Allah shines your way to be the best as He wants us to be..
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