HI GIRLS
HOW R U TODAY
girls i have an assigment it's how 2 write good paragraph
i tried
this is my paragraph it is about dicision i should be allowed to make for myself
i have some dicisions i made it for my self in my life. one of them is i should correct what is between me &ALLAH(SWT)then what is between me &people.Then every work&step i do it in my life should to be streling to Allah.next i should make accompany with valid friends who can help me to be on good way in my life.fainally,make a dicisions in my life help me to supporting the personalities in my life
this is my tries
pleas help me to correct my paragraph wich full with mistaks
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my paragraph>>>>>>>>>>>>
t
26-12-2007 | 12:19 AM
ت
26-12-2007 | 02:01 AM
أولا حسب معلوماتى لا بد تتركى مسافة فى بداية البراجراف ولا تبدأى من أول السطر
[COLOR=royalblue][COLOR=#cc0066][COLOR=royalblue][COLOR=#ff0066][COLOR=royalblue]I [/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]have some dicisions I made them for myself in my life. one of them is I should [/COLOR]
correct what is etween me &ALLAH(SWT)then what is between me &people.Then every work&step I do it in my life should to be streling to Allah.next I should make accompany with good friends who can help me to be on the right way .fainally,making dicisions in my life helps me to support my personality.
myself كلمة واحدة غير مفصولة
ال I ضمير المتكلم لازم تكون capital
واظن انك يجب تستعملى first & second فى الترتيب بدل then
personalities لماذا جمع؟
لا تكررى in my life كتير .. لا يحبذ التكرار فى الإنجليزى
وان شاء الله البنات يساعدونك اذا انا نسيت شئ
وان شاء الله لى عودة
[COLOR=royalblue][COLOR=#cc0066][COLOR=royalblue][COLOR=#ff0066][COLOR=royalblue]I [/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]have some dicisions I made them for myself in my life. one of them is I should [/COLOR]
correct what is etween me &ALLAH(SWT)then what is between me &people.Then every work&step I do it in my life should to be streling to Allah.next I should make accompany with good friends who can help me to be on the right way .fainally,making dicisions in my life helps me to support my personality.
myself كلمة واحدة غير مفصولة
ال I ضمير المتكلم لازم تكون capital
واظن انك يجب تستعملى first & second فى الترتيب بدل then
personalities لماذا جمع؟
لا تكررى in my life كتير .. لا يحبذ التكرار فى الإنجليزى
وان شاء الله البنات يساعدونك اذا انا نسيت شئ
وان شاء الله لى عودة
l
26-12-2007 | 01:44 PM
I have some dicisions I made them for my self in mylife. One of them is, I should correct what is between me &ALLAH(SWT)then what is between me &people.Then, every work&step I do it in my life should be streling to Allah.Next, I should make acompany with valid friends who can help me to be on good way in my life.Fainally, make a dicisions in my life help me supporting the personality in my life
t
26-12-2007 | 07:03 PM
thanks alot sisters
may Allah rewared u
but i want to ask u
is there any grammatical mistakes?
may Allah rewared u
but i want to ask u
is there any grammatical mistakes?
ت
26-12-2007 | 10:51 PM
there are some mistakes which we corrected them
t
27-12-2007 | 04:35 PM
