who like to write poems or stories?

Great poem fdetny
it's really interesting
thanx for ur fantastic effort

and this is ma other poem
((i try ))
I try, I try, and I try.
But I can't seem how to fly.
I try and I try.
But I really can't understand why.
I'm feeling so sad and shy,
So I sit in the rock and I cry.
And again I try and I try,
But again I sit in the rock and cry.
Well, ah ill try again….
At least I will fly and meet my friends in the sky.

where r u ? no bdy likes to write im so mad n sad !!!!
n ther is ni bdy like ma poems!
thhx sally

i love the way it's been put together
i realy love it.its such a pleasing poem to read and is a great reflect on life and simplist things.
short and sweet
thanks so much fdetnyy.
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welcm n thx 2 u 4 givin me u r opinion but im searchin 4 ppl who writes poems or stories
why we dnt show other or dont tell others tht we r writtin smthn gd itd nt bad thin like if uhv grammer mistakes other can croccet it 4 u ..Mabye 1 day will be famouse (hhh)
Inshalla god will give us a good mind n health to complete this way to write poems n stories
n inshalla we can do everthin which is gd as we r walkin in a stight way

nice

thank you

U r welcme