اول خاطره لي بالانجليزي...ابي آرائكم وانتقاداتكم..تعالووو

جنا 09-10-2006 11 رد 1,955 مشاهدة
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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
هاذي اول مره اكتب خاطره وكتبتها بالانجليزي
بحكم تخصصي بس على فكره انا مبتدئه
لسى مستوى ثاني بالجامعه:shy:
المهم تمهني ارائكم وانتقاداتكم خصوصا اصحاب الخبره...(f)

I see you in every place,
I imagine your smile in every face
where are you?
I don't find any trace
how can you let me lone
while the only thing I can do is remember your voice tone,and start wailing as a little girl
don't you remember our deal?
when my eyes whisper to your eyes
"let's be lovers for ever for ever"
"for ever is too short"
your eyes answered my eyes with warm hug
in that moment I realized how much you love me
belong to your love
I can't take any more
you know where you can find me
just ask your heart and you will find the answer there

يالله انتظر ردودكم
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CLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPS YA JANA

(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)

AWESOME WORDS ND MEANINGFULL TOO

UR TALENT SISTER KEEP IT UP

AND ENSHALLA ONE DAY U'LL B KNOWN WELL SOMEWHERE

GOOD LUCK


:shy:


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(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
thankyou my dear
I can't express my delight
when I saw your comment
thanks a lot for your encouragement :salam:
I promise you to keep up
thanks again
(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
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wooooooow its sooo nice
and keeo it up
really its perfect
and thankx dear
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wooooooow its sooo nice
and keeo it up
really its perfect
and thankx
:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
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(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
thanks dalo3ah
for passing in my topic
thankyou for your nice words
thankyou my dear
(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
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:shy: hey hun its nice walla keep it like this
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Danah
thankyou so much my dear
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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته ..

هلا و غلا اختي جنا

gooood start.. i like your ideas and line of thoughts..

they say when you love someone let them go.. if they come back they belong to you, if they don't come back they were never yours to begin with..

keeep on writing dear.. and with time you will go from good to the best (y)

and dont forget to post for us .. whatever you write :)

:flower: :flower: :flower:
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Al3aneedh
thankyou so much
I'm afraid if I let them go they won't belong:dd: ...
but I agree with you if they don't belong,they won't be mine:no: .
thanks again for your advice:salam: .
I promise you if I write anything, I won't hesitate to tel you about it ,and I'll request your criticism too.
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I promise you if I write anything, I won't hesitate to tel you about it ,and I'll request your criticism too.


Helloooooooooo!!:think: :think: :think: :think: :think:

knock knock!!

any one home..:eek2:

jana!! u'll post it just for al 3aneedah :pain:

guess who was the first to encourage ya

shame on you :cry:

>>>>>upset

:sad:


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Bent 3athary
I'm sorry my dear
but I don't know why are you upset!!!!:sad:
wait ..wait
if you mean that I'll forget to request your criticism
you are wrong :no:
I don't forget that you are the first one who encouraged me:clap: :clap:
I'm grateful to you my dear(f) (f) (f)
please please please
don't think like that
(f) if I'll write something ,I'll post it for all of you ,and you too my dear.
I won't forget to ask your criticism too
(f) (f) (f) so please don't be upset from me ..
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