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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A button on the keyboard



ذارفة الدمع
03/12/2003, 09:28 AM
:x_hello: A button on the keyboard

What can I write
About our first fight?
You said you will never shout at me but I
Was sure you will
And as usual you made my life a hell
So now I don't mind If you shout at me or
Even kill
As long as you are the one who pays the
Phone bill!
I was not happy when I was not with you,
My life is just worse I wish I didn’t say ,, I
Do
But I did ! I am sorry I was crazy .
I wish I never grew up and always stayed a
Baby
But I am a grown up now
And I wish I were a cow
But I am still a human
And I wish I were not a woman

And for sure never a man
I wish I were a fan!
Or just a piece of a paper?
To do people a big favor!
For all think I am a trouble maker
What about being a screen saver?
To shine up people's day!
What about being a sentence in an essay?
Or just a button on a keyboard to undo
Whatever I say !





I hope you like the poem which I write from the NEWSLETTER of my college

amaladel
03/12/2003, 05:01 PM
ذارفة الدمع



Thanks a lot for your participation and for the nice poem but I have to pay your attention that you must not think about the rhyme at the expense of the meaning or the rhythm of the sentence. I had to correct your spelling of screen saver because you wrote it "screen savor" to keep the rhyme, which is not correct, of course. However, your way of expression is very nice and I want you to resume your efforts. You said you write it from the newsletter of your college and I understand that you wrote it yourself for the newsletter, am I right??z


Best Regards

ذارفة الدمع
04/12/2003, 03:50 AM
No my sister Amal I didn’t write this poem I wish I could write like these beautiful

Words but I am not a poet .

MY BEST WISHES
:shy:

ذارفة الدمع
04/12/2003, 10:17 PM
I wrote it screen saver not savor my sister Amal :o

amaladel
04/12/2003, 11:54 PM
My dear, you wrote it "savor" but I have corrected it for you along with other spelling mistakes I am sure you had made because you were typing fast. Anyway, I am happy that you have participated with us and I am certain you can write similar lovely words. I am waiting for your participations

عشيقت الروح
24/01/2004, 05:35 PM
ماعرفت شالسالفة:pain: بس أتمنى أعرف الأنجليزي كيف ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
أنا مش بطالة أعرف أقرى بس ما أفهم كل شي


:D2:D2:D2:D2:D2:D2

amaladel
24/01/2004, 06:24 PM
عشيفت الروح


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